The hazards of assuming too much

March 26, 2008 – 5:18 pm

As an editor, I’m always on the alert for passages where writers assume some knowledge that their readers may actually not have. When you’re the expert on your topic, this is a particularly easy trap to fall into.

Today while I was working out at the gym, this hazard was highlighted in an amusing way.

A woman I hadn’t met before was talking to the owner about her upcoming trip to Las Vegas and commented that her family was going there for her granddaughter’s first birthday.

I was shocked!  I’ve heard incredible stories about over-the-top birthday celebrations for very young children, but this really took the cake.  A trip to Vegas for your first birthday?

I didn’t want to be rude, but I just couldn’t stand it.

“Did you say ‘one-year-old’?” I asked, as politely as I could. “Yes,” she replied.

“And you’re taking her to Vegas for her first birthday???”

“She lives there!” the grandmother replied. “I guess you haven’t heard me talking about her before.”

We shared a good laugh over my misunderstanding and continued our workout.

On the way home, I reflected that this was a good example of someone assuming too much knowledge on the part of the audience . . . and it is.

But I was chastened when I realized it was also a good example of jumping to conclusions!

Not only did I automatically assume the worst, but it never occurred to me to think of Vegas as a place where people actually live. Of course I know they do, but I tend to think of it only as a tourist destination (if you’re into that kind of thing) and conference venue.

So I guess the last laugh is on me!

Motivations for Writing

March 21, 2008 – 11:00 am

 

Sir, no man but a blockhead ever wrote except for money.

 

~ Samuel Johnson

 

 

 

Instead of marvelling with Johnson, how anything but profit should incite men to literary labour, I am rather surprised that mere emolument should induce them to labour so well.

 

~ Thomas Green

 

 

 

Almost anyone can be an author; the business is to collect money and fame from this state of being.

 

~ A. A. Milne

 

 

What are your motivations for writing? Please leave a comment!

 

Fine Writing

March 21, 2008 – 10:14 am

 

Read over your compositions and, when you meet a passage which you think is particularly fine, strike it out.

 

 

~ Samuel Johnson

Poor writing distracts from your message

March 14, 2008 – 10:58 am

Marti Pieper commented on “What makes a book great?”:

“If a book lacks excellent writing–if the writing is so poor that it causes the reader to miss the flow of thought or focus on the mistakes rather than the message–it will never become a great book.”

Very well put! Even a poorly written book can contain useful information . . . but poor writing and outright errors distract readers’ attention and keep them from getting the full benefit of the message.

Don’t let poor writing throw up a roadblock for your readers. Instead, make sure it’s smoothly paved, free of potholes, and clearly marked with useful road signs to help readers reach their destination.